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I just came back to this story after looking up Long Live Simmons to see if there were any new stories that I could read when I noticed that this storyβs title had been edit to say dropped. We didnβt get any notification of it being dropped besides the title change. Itβs sad to know it was dropped this was such a good story. Definitely the best one on webnovel.
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How do people rate this novel highly? It's not good everything is just glossed over as if it was only a summary, not a story. It's nothing special and very boring to read. I skimmed through the sentences because it was boring. What a boring fanfiction to read. The characters are one dimensional.
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Ahem....This is my first review of this novel 1. Actually rather than fanfic you can call this novel a revision for original albeit with some small difference 2. Your novel need to fix the grammatical error if you want your novel to pass 100th place That's all & good luck
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Itβs a pretty well written story and I canβt deny that Iβm starting to get hook on the story and the plot. Like how the mc is trying to not make the same mistakes like how the original did
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******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
I just came back to this story after looking up Long Live Simmons to see if there were any new stories that I could read when I noticed that this storyβs title had been edit to say dropped. We didnβt get any notification of it being dropped besides the title change. Itβs sad to know it was dropped this was such a good story. Definitely the best one on webnovel.
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How do people rate this novel highly? It's not good everything is just glossed over as if it was only a summary, not a story. It's nothing special and very boring to read. I skimmed through the sentences because it was boring. What a boring fanfiction to read. The characters are one dimensional.
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I hope the author will read comments although some of them were just negative there are some comments that can make you became a better author. For example the cub become cube, alpha became alfa, Yue shuang became yue shang, please read comments
Ahem....This is my first review of this novel 1. Actually rather than fanfic you can call this novel a revision for original albeit with some small difference 2. Your novel need to fix the grammatical error if you want your novel to pass 100th place That's all & good luck
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Itβs a pretty well written story and I canβt deny that Iβm starting to get hook on the story and the plot. Like how the mc is trying to not make the same mistakes like how the original did
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